5 Comments
User's avatar
Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Anyone can write a good story. Some of us can create a great story. But to create lore in your story—a new god for the pantheon or a monster to be wary of—that is a rare gift. You, my friend, have achieved this. I take my hat off to you. Great job!

Expand full comment
Dblkrose of BSP's avatar

Well thank you for making my night with that comment! Very much appreciated.

Expand full comment
Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

You are most welcome. Keep doing great work!

Expand full comment
DWWakefield's avatar

This wrapped me in its foggy grayness as the words rose and fell in gothic ambience.

Expand full comment
Gregory Blair's avatar

Deliciously creepy, unexpected and satisfying.

Expand full comment